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The Music Dies (entry for Darci Cole's contest)


Discordancy, sweetheart
Try it yourself --
Pluck our strings
Hear the notes collide and dull the shimmer
A semitone maybe
But it abides
Play a song
With that chord inside and lose the listener
Or the player…

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you have a way with words. there is a nice rhythm to it.
I like this. I really like, 'Hear the notes collide and dull the shimmer.' :)
I love your use of words here, especially "lose the listener, or the player..." So good!

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